I am reading just now this is your first game, first let me say: Great job with the art and CGs, it all looks amazing!
The story is interesting but the beginning is kinda slow, I know this is just a demo or the prologue but the first part could use some rewriting (in my opinion at least) The story does pick up as it goes and it finishes in a very interesting cliffhanger!
The obvious thing to mention is that the lack of music or background sound really brings all the experience down a few notches, even stock music would do since the art more than makes up for it.
omggg thank you!! 🥺💗 i'm glad that the game interested you! listening to your comments and the chat comments during the game was quite interesting, considering that this is my first experience creating a game!
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Ohhhh, I loved it so much! I'm so excited for the next chapters <3
The story is interesting but the beginning is kinda slow, I know this is just a demo or the prologue but the first part could use some rewriting (in my opinion at least) The story does pick up as it goes and it finishes in a very interesting cliffhanger!
The obvious thing to mention is that the lack of music or background sound really brings all the experience down a few notches, even stock music would do since the art more than makes up for it.
Keep up the good work!
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omggg thank you!! 🥺💗 i'm glad that the game interested you! listening to your comments and the chat comments during the game was quite interesting, considering that this is my first experience creating a game!